I'm alone in the house.
Eden Roan swallowed away the lump in her throat. Why hadn't she known everyone was leaving? Her heart rate picked up, thumping hard against her ribcage. She hadn't been alone in six months. Not since Charma and Marina had found her, nearly comatose, locked up in a
mental institution in New Jersey.
A fabulous opening six! And congrats on your release! :)
ReplyDeleteNice six! Congrats on your release! I'm going to go buy it now!
ReplyDeleteOh wow! I feel her intense fear. Great SSS!
ReplyDeleteIntense six...perfect opening!
ReplyDeleteintense opening, congrats on your release!
ReplyDeleteOpening with fear. Now that's intense.
ReplyDeleteOh heck, it sounds like she's had a bit of a rough time of it.
ReplyDeleteWow - what an intense opening for your book! Very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your release!