He drew away. She missed the warmth immediately. His breath was strained, rough, and he manipulated her head down on his chest. He whispered in her ear, “We’re exposed here. Anyone could see us.”
I also love "missing the warmth" - I can feel that as I read. As for the chances of being seen, that just makes it HOTTER! :c) Great six! <<almost wrote "sex" instead of six. I do that a lot, LOL.
Congratulations on the new release! Hmm, cokeheads with cell phone cameras...a turn-off? Of course, even at home there could be roommates with cell phone cameras and YouTube accounts...eek! Tension-filled six!
Heh, heh... what had they been up to? Nice six!
ReplyDeleteThose cokeheads. Always causing trouble for good folks who want to have public sex . . . :) Cute six!
ReplyDeleteLOL I think we've all had moments like that where we've been tempted...but will possible coke heads with cameras be enough to stop them?
ReplyDeleteGreat tension. Great six!
ReplyDeleteGreat tension!
ReplyDeleteWow. Love the tension. Great six.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a very inauspicious time to be interrupted. I got the visual very well. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteOohh, I love that last line.
ReplyDeleteUmmm, I get the feeling that she doesn't care.
ReplyDeleteGood tension here, Rebecca. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteYes, get away some place more private. :) A great six from a great story!
ReplyDeleteMissing the warmth immediately, you put me straight in there. Awesome writing. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI also love "missing the warmth" - I can feel that as I read. As for the chances of being seen, that just makes it HOTTER! :c) Great six! <<almost wrote "sex" instead of six. I do that a lot, LOL.
ReplyDeleteThe temptation of public sex...totally pulled into the scene.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the new release! Hmm, cokeheads with cell phone cameras...a turn-off? Of course, even at home there could be roommates with cell phone cameras and YouTube accounts...eek! Tension-filled six!
ReplyDeleteI love how she 'missed the warmth.' :)
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