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Sunday, December 18, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

He drew away. She missed the warmth immediately. His breath was strained, rough, and he manipulated her head down on his chest. He whispered in her ear, “We’re exposed here. Anyone could see us.”

Coke-heads with cell phone cameras.

16 comments:

  1. Heh, heh... what had they been up to? Nice six!

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  2. Those cokeheads. Always causing trouble for good folks who want to have public sex . . . :) Cute six!

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  3. LOL I think we've all had moments like that where we've been tempted...but will possible coke heads with cameras be enough to stop them?

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  4. Sounds like a very inauspicious time to be interrupted. I got the visual very well. Nice six!

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  5. Ummm, I get the feeling that she doesn't care.

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  6. Good tension here, Rebecca. Thanks for sharing!

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  7. Yes, get away some place more private. :) A great six from a great story!

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  8. Missing the warmth immediately, you put me straight in there. Awesome writing. Thank you.

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  9. I also love "missing the warmth" - I can feel that as I read. As for the chances of being seen, that just makes it HOTTER! :c) Great six! <<almost wrote "sex" instead of six. I do that a lot, LOL.

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  10. The temptation of public sex...totally pulled into the scene.

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  11. Congratulations on the new release! Hmm, cokeheads with cell phone cameras...a turn-off? Of course, even at home there could be roommates with cell phone cameras and YouTube accounts...eek! Tension-filled six!

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  12. I love how she 'missed the warmth.' :)

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