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Sunday, October 30, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

She knew every contour of his face. He had black hair, very similar to hers and a face that looked like it had seen more worries than most people his age even though it was still smooth and unlined. The eyes were haunted even though they pretended to be jovial. No one should have eyes that were that hidden. The windows to his soul held the look of a person who was totally in control all of the time. She wondered if he ever smiled or did he just pretend to?

12 comments:

  1. Excellent insight into the characters. I loved this book! :)

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  2. Can't wait to see him smile! My favorite kind of hero. Great six!

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  3. Wonderful six sentences! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!

    Stephanie Adkins
    http://stephanieadkins.blogspot.com/

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  4. Why am I thinkin that she helps him lose control now? Hee. Great snippet.

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  5. Such great character development in your physical descriptions. Well done.

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  6. Oh, that last line got me. I can see him.

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  7. Wowzers. That's a pretty incredible description you've got there! So vivid. Awesome writing, Rebecca!

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  8. Excellent description. Thanks for sharing!

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  9. I love your descriptive work. You paint true scenes and believable characters. Thank you!

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