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Sunday, May 6, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday


This is from the first book in my YA series The Warrior.



I knew that sound. It was him. The wolf that had grabbed me in the Outpost and dragged me outside into the wicked sun. The event rushed back into my throbbing head, and I wished I could fall back into blissful unconsciousness. I was trapped with Werewolves, and I had no idea what they wanted with me. 
I really, really wanted to go home. 

7 comments:

  1. Great snippet! I can't wait to read more!

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  2. Can so feel her distress in this six! Great job! :)

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  3. I love the voice in that last sentence. She sounds young, and scared, and vulnerable. (It's all about word choice, eh?)

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  5. LOVE this. THIS is how YA should be written. The voice is excellent, and I want to know more.

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  6. Woah, pulled me right in. I love it. I must read this book. I want to know more.

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