Todays six are from Her Wolf: The Westervelt Wolves Book 1, the book that started it all for me. You can purchase it here or at most online bookstores if you are interested. Make sure to visit all the 6-Sunday authors. The list can be found here. When she found him, she stopped breathing for a second as pleasure swirled within her chest. With his dark mane and his proud posture, he would have stood out even if he didn’t avoid the others. She walked closer, just to the edge of where he was visible to her, careful not to draw attention to herself.
Loneliness hung like a tangible cloak around him. Ashlee chuckled at her crazy thoughts. God, if anyone heard her inner dialogue, they’d think she was talking about a man, not a wolf.
Wonderful six, beautifully written. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHe sounds beautiful. Wolves are awesomer than men, but I guess werewolves take the cake :D Great six, Rebecca!
ReplyDeleteWonderful description and internal dialogue. A fabulous six!
ReplyDeleteExcellent snippet. Her emotions are so palpable. And hey, if you can get man and wolf in one package, that's a great deal!
ReplyDeleteI remember this scene! SLove when she finds him!
ReplyDeleteNo wonder she wants him--I want him too. Rawrrrr!
ReplyDeleteShe finds him - nice - wonder if she knows what she found?
ReplyDeleteNice six. I love the bit about loneliness :)
ReplyDeleteTouching, Rebecca. Haunting and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove this book! Great six Rebecca. :)
ReplyDeleteI can really like the character insight in this six.
ReplyDeletePoetically revealing snippet.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and powerful snippet!
ReplyDeleteTo her, he is a man. Love the six
ReplyDeleteThere's a subtle sense of melancholy with the six. Nice!
ReplyDeleteOnly in this case, it's the same thing, so I'm thinking she's being too hard on herself. ;)
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Rebecca.
This is so nicely written xx Great six xx
ReplyDeleteLike the cloak of loneliness. Very moody. Nice.
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Rebecca!
ReplyDeleteAn amazing description and inner workings of her thoughts. This book is what led me to you so it holds a special place for me.
ReplyDeleteGreat six with a lot of emotional punch. She doesn't know how true her words are, does she?
ReplyDeleteGreat description! Wonderful six! TY for the visit to Michael M's
ReplyDeleteLoneliness hung like a tangible cloak around him.
ReplyDeleteLove. Great six
Great description! Enjoyed!
ReplyDeleteLots of conflicting feeling in this: caution and compassion and then self-consciousness (as she hears her own thoughts)... and of course quite a bit of transition in six sentences.
ReplyDeleteYour prose is always so evocative. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeletegreat description; her inner thoguths are wonderful
ReplyDeleteYou had me convinced you were talking about a man. I had to go back and reread! Great six!
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