This weeks installment of Six Sentence Sunday comes from my current Work In Progress. I had no intention of writing this story but after the death of my father-in-law a few weeks ago, it was the only thing my muse had any interest in writing. So I am writing it even though it has not brewed very long in my imagination and I have little idea of what will actually happen or how long it will turn out to be. So far? Its very hot. Much hotter than most of what I write. That's fine. I love heat in the stories I read. Tentatively, we can call this one On The Sea. I'm going to assume its what I'm supposed to be writing right now since it is pouring out of me.
No matter what time of day it was, men and women ran in circles around the red painted track. Over and over again. She closed her eyes.
Sylarus.
She shouldn’t be surprised he was coming.
After all, that had been the point of boarding the ship in the first place.
Best to all of you
RR
Sounds very intriguing. I look forward to reading more! :)
ReplyDeleteHow intriguing! I wonder if Sylarus is a person or a creature or a thing?? Good six and condolences for your father in law.
ReplyDeletecondolences on your loss - well certainly want to know more - truck ? on a ship ? good six
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry to hear of your loss, Rebecca. It will be interesting to see where this story takes you. Nice six and they raised a lot of questions. Who is Sylarus and why is he coming? Is this a cruise ship. Many hooks in this bit. :)
ReplyDeleteIntriguing. Off to a good start!
ReplyDeleteWe have to listen to our Muse no matter what it says. This sounds like a great story. I love the six.
ReplyDeleteWhen the muse speaks...well, you get Sylarus calling.
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Rebecca!
gem
Great start! Post more next week.
ReplyDeleteSorry to hear of your loss, Rebecca. Based on this snippet, I'm delighted your following your muse. Intriging lines, and yep, I'd love to know more about Sylarus.
ReplyDeleteOoh I'm so intrigued!
ReplyDeleteGood to see the Muse is working in your favour :-)
Let your muse run with your imagination.. *hugs*
ReplyDeleteNice setup. I definitely want to know more.
ReplyDeleteListen to your muse! Very intriguing six!
ReplyDelete~Sarah
I'm sorry to hear about your loss. Trust your muse...
ReplyDeleteSounds neat!! Good luck with it!
ReplyDeleteSo glad your muse is talking to you & it's pouring out. Can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant six, Rebecca!
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry for your loss, but glad your writing is providing solace :)
Great six, Rebecca! Love where this is going and can't wait to see more.
ReplyDeleteThis is great. And great that your muse is throwing such inspiration at you. Sorry about your father-in-law.
ReplyDeleteMy condolences again. I think following what your muse wants to do is probably a good thing.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing snippet and I love that pic. So the MC is a mermaid?
Intriguing six! Wonder what will happen when Sylarus shows up.
ReplyDeleteSorry to hear of your loss. My condolences.
I am so sorry for your loss. You're off to a great start with the story though!
ReplyDeleteYes, you're probably meant to be doing this now. Will love to see where this is going.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing. Great Six
ReplyDeleteMy sympathies.
ReplyDeleteThe name Sylarus makes me think of sea monsters since you mentioned a ship - can't wait to find out more.