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Sunday, March 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This weeks installment of Six Sentence Sunday comes from my current Work In Progress. I had no intention of writing this story but after the death of my father-in-law a few weeks ago, it was the only thing my muse had any interest in writing. So I am writing it even though it has not brewed very long in my imagination and I have little idea of what will actually happen or how long it will turn out to be. So far? Its very hot. Much hotter than most of what I write. That's fine. I love heat in the stories I read.

Tentatively, we can call this one On The Sea. I'm going to assume its what I'm supposed to be writing right now since it is pouring out of me.

No matter what time of day it was, men and women ran in circles around the red painted track. Over and over again. She closed her eyes.

Sylarus.

She shouldn’t be surprised he was coming.

After all, that had been the point of boarding the ship in the first place.


Best to all of you

RR

25 comments:

  1. Sounds very intriguing. I look forward to reading more! :)

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  2. How intriguing! I wonder if Sylarus is a person or a creature or a thing?? Good six and condolences for your father in law.

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  3. condolences on your loss - well certainly want to know more - truck ? on a ship ? good six

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  4. I'm sorry to hear of your loss, Rebecca. It will be interesting to see where this story takes you. Nice six and they raised a lot of questions. Who is Sylarus and why is he coming? Is this a cruise ship. Many hooks in this bit. :)

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  5. We have to listen to our Muse no matter what it says. This sounds like a great story. I love the six.

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  6. When the muse speaks...well, you get Sylarus calling.

    Great six, Rebecca!

    gem

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  7. Sorry to hear of your loss, Rebecca. Based on this snippet, I'm delighted your following your muse. Intriging lines, and yep, I'd love to know more about Sylarus.

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  8. Ooh I'm so intrigued!
    Good to see the Muse is working in your favour :-)

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  9. Let your muse run with your imagination.. *hugs*

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  10. Nice setup. I definitely want to know more.

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  11. Listen to your muse! Very intriguing six!

    ~Sarah

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  12. I'm sorry to hear about your loss. Trust your muse...

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  13. So glad your muse is talking to you & it's pouring out. Can't wait to read more.

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  14. Brilliant six, Rebecca!

    I'm sorry for your loss, but glad your writing is providing solace :)

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  15. Great six, Rebecca! Love where this is going and can't wait to see more.

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  16. This is great. And great that your muse is throwing such inspiration at you. Sorry about your father-in-law.

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  17. My condolences again. I think following what your muse wants to do is probably a good thing.

    Intriguing snippet and I love that pic. So the MC is a mermaid?

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  18. Intriguing six! Wonder what will happen when Sylarus shows up.

    Sorry to hear of your loss. My condolences.

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  19. I am so sorry for your loss. You're off to a great start with the story though!

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  20. Yes, you're probably meant to be doing this now. Will love to see where this is going.

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  21. My sympathies.
    The name Sylarus makes me think of sea monsters since you mentioned a ship - can't wait to find out more.

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