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Sunday, March 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

So, as I have finished my mermaid story (and as soon as I am certain what I want to call it, I will submit it.) I am back to writing the second book in my Conditioned series, called "Embraced."

Here are six sentences from Embraced.

“It’s too late, Eugene.” He sighed. “I’m involved. She’s a sweet, young woman. Young being the key word of that sentence. They’re not supposed to be killed so early and I’m starting to think that if I had ever thought about the fact they get murdered at all I would have objected before now.”

He hoped he would have. He liked to think he was the kind of person who would have said something.

“Whom would you have objected to?”


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RR


22 comments:

  1. Very intriguing! I look forward to you sharing more. :)

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  2. I'm pulled in completely, more please? :)

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  3. Definitely pulls you in. I want to know why their getting killed.

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  4. Oh, I really, really got pulled right in. I'd love to keep reading.

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  5. Great question! Very intriguing.

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  6. A great opening tease and now I want more.

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  7. Yep I agree - who what why etc ....

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  8. This really grabs me, Rebecca.
    Nice six.

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  9. Wow, I want to know more. Good job!

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  10. Wow. All sorts of questions. Nice tease!
    Read Alpha Wolf this week and I'm happy there are already a bunch of other books in that series. Michael was a great hero :)

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  11. Great start. I am grabbed totally. Can't wait to read more

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  12. Hooked! Well, why the heck ARE they killing 'em?

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  13. same here, I'm hooked in...so want to carry on reading! Nice six xx

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  14. A bit of ethical ambivalence revealed? Great use of self talk to excavate that.

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  15. Oh, that is such an emotion filled six.

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  16. Great snippet and I'm wondering who too! :)

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  17. Great Hook! I'm definitely intrigued!

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