Here are six sentences from Embraced.
“It’s too late, Eugene.” He sighed. “I’m involved. She’s a sweet, young woman. Young being the key word of that sentence. They’re not supposed to be killed so early and I’m starting to think that if I had ever thought about the fact they get murdered at all I would have objected before now.”
He hoped he would have. He liked to think he was the kind of person who would have said something.
“Whom would you have objected to?”
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Very intriguing! I look forward to you sharing more. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm pulled in completely, more please? :)
ReplyDeleteDefinitely pulls you in. I want to know why their getting killed.
ReplyDeleteOh, I really, really got pulled right in. I'd love to keep reading.
ReplyDeleteGreat question! Very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteintriguing. liked the pic!
ReplyDeleteA great opening tease and now I want more.
ReplyDeleteYep I agree - who what why etc ....
ReplyDeleteThis really grabs me, Rebecca.
ReplyDeleteNice six.
Wow, I want to know more. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWow. All sorts of questions. Nice tease!
ReplyDeleteRead Alpha Wolf this week and I'm happy there are already a bunch of other books in that series. Michael was a great hero :)
Great start. I am grabbed totally. Can't wait to read more
ReplyDeleteHooked! Well, why the heck ARE they killing 'em?
ReplyDeletesame here, I'm hooked in...so want to carry on reading! Nice six xx
ReplyDeleteA bit of ethical ambivalence revealed? Great use of self talk to excavate that.
ReplyDeleteOh, that is such an emotion filled six.
ReplyDeleteNice, intriguing snippet.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet and I'm wondering who too! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat Hook! I'm definitely intrigued!
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing. :)
ReplyDeleteMore, please! :)
ReplyDeletemurder and mystery - cool 6!
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