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Sunday, April 10, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday


Hi everyone. Thanks so much everyone for stopping by every week!! I thought I would pick six sentences from my current Work In Progress called Embraced. For those of you who haven't heard me discuss this before, it's the second in a series that I'm writing called The Conditioned. The first book called Eye Contact. It's available now with Decadent Publishing. If you're interested, you can check it out here.

But this weeks six sentences are from Embraced. It will be number 2 in the series

“You’re human.”

Everything about her was human and very, very female. His libido was keenly aware of just how feminine she actually was. It was all he could do not to slam her against the wall and be a much more aggressive lover than he’d ever been in his life.


“Don’t let them take her. They’ll make her me.”


Best,
RR

47 comments:

  1. Love the inner thoughts going on xx great six xx

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  2. ooh, very evocative and I love the ending! Can't wait for the next six.

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  3. So much going on in only six sentences. Definitely peaks my interest and I want to read more. :)

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  4. I love the affect she has on him! The last sentence hooked me. can't wait to find out what's up with that!

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  5. Oooh, very nice, Rebecca.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  6. Oh, your last sentence is a real tease. I have to know what "me" has become or is...Great six!

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  7. Make her me??? LOVE the hook. And, yes, great show of his interest in her.

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  8. Very intriguing! I want to know what she means by 'make her me.' Oh, and I absolutely LOVE the effect she has on him. You'll share more next week, right?

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  9. Another one for the TBR list!

    Great hook in that last sentence!

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  10. That last line has me so curious.

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  11. Intriguing last line. Who is "me?" Nice six.

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  12. great 6, the ending caught me totally off-guard, very curious now

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  13. Love the hook line-They'll make her me... great hook.

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  14. Definitely arouses one's curiosity. Great six.

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  15. Oh, I so love it when the hero's hot and heavy but restrains himself (for whatever reason). Mmmm. Nice.

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  16. Hot thoughts and such an intriguing last line!

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  17. Wonderful heat in this snippet and then leaving the reader with a question.

    Don't let them take her?

    Who's 'them'? And how will they make her like him. Very intrigued to discover the answers. :)

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  18. Oh, that last line--says so much, and I want to know exactly how much!
    I also wanted to say, the visuals at your site here are fabulous!

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  19. Yes, lots of questions here! Too many questions! I don't know if I can wait to find out!

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  20. That last line definitely hooked me.

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  21. Provocative and sexy six. Great hook at the end.

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  22. Mystery and passion. Great six.

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  23. Fab six, Rebecca xx I'll be sure to pick up the first next time I'm buying ebooks -- sounds like I'd love it :) And by gosh, he should take her... the tension in this scene is sizzling HOT!

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  24. oh you word tease :D - very good

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  25. Very tense with a touch of sadness. Great six!

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  26. I think he's about to become her champion in whatever that last line meant. :)

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  27. Great snippet! Love the twist at the end. :)

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  28. Hmm, who is the 'me' at the end? Whoever it is, it doesn't sound like a good thing. Great six!

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  29. Great intro to the hot-blooded hero, and an irresistible left turn twist at the end. This six is both hot and cool!

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  30. Great six with a lovely hook to end!

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  31. This is just amazing. Such intensity! Love these six! (And allow me to offer my highest recommendation for this book! It is this good all the way through!)

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  32. Great six! Leaves me gagging to find out more.

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  33. I LOVE reading about a man so affected by a woman! Great!

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  34. Great hook. I want to know more now. Thanks for visiting my blog earlier and commenting on my Six Sentence Sunday post.

    Debra

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  35. You have me hooked! Now where's the rest? ;-)

    Great six, Rebecca!

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  36. LOVED the last sentence! What a great hook.

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  37. Oh, I loved that last line of dialogue “Don’t let them take her. They’ll make her me.” Leaves me with all kinds of questions I want answers to.

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  38. Intriguing! Love the little war inside his head.

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  39. Oh wow. That's really interesting. Can't wait to see more from this!

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