Hi everyone. Thanks so much everyone for stopping by every week!! I thought I would pick six sentences from my current Work In Progress called Embraced. For those of you who haven't heard me discuss this before, it's the second in a series that I'm writing called The Conditioned. The first book called Eye Contact. It's available now with Decadent Publishing. If you're interested, you can check it out here.
But this weeks six sentences are from Embraced. It will be number 2 in the series
“You’re human.”
Everything about her was human and very, very female. His libido was keenly aware of just how feminine she actually was. It was all he could do not to slam her against the wall and be a much more aggressive lover than he’d ever been in his life.
“Don’t let them take her. They’ll make her me.”
Best,
RR
Love the inner thoughts going on xx great six xx
ReplyDeleteooh, very evocative and I love the ending! Can't wait for the next six.
ReplyDeleteSo much going on in only six sentences. Definitely peaks my interest and I want to read more. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm intrigued, great six.
ReplyDeleteI love the affect she has on him! The last sentence hooked me. can't wait to find out what's up with that!
ReplyDeleteOooh, very nice, Rebecca.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Oh, your last sentence is a real tease. I have to know what "me" has become or is...Great six!
ReplyDeleteMake her me??? LOVE the hook. And, yes, great show of his interest in her.
ReplyDeleteGreat twist! Very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteNice twist at the end!
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing! I want to know what she means by 'make her me.' Oh, and I absolutely LOVE the effect she has on him. You'll share more next week, right?
ReplyDeleteVery intense. Great six.
ReplyDeleteAnother one for the TBR list!
ReplyDeleteGreat hook in that last sentence!
That last line has me so curious.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing last line. Who is "me?" Nice six.
ReplyDeletegreat 6, the ending caught me totally off-guard, very curious now
ReplyDeleteLove the hook line-They'll make her me... great hook.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely arouses one's curiosity. Great six.
ReplyDeleteOh, I so love it when the hero's hot and heavy but restrains himself (for whatever reason). Mmmm. Nice.
ReplyDeleteHot thoughts and such an intriguing last line!
ReplyDeleteWonderful heat in this snippet and then leaving the reader with a question.
ReplyDeleteDon't let them take her?
Who's 'them'? And how will they make her like him. Very intrigued to discover the answers. :)
Oh, that last line--says so much, and I want to know exactly how much!
ReplyDeleteI also wanted to say, the visuals at your site here are fabulous!
Yes, lots of questions here! Too many questions! I don't know if I can wait to find out!
ReplyDeleteOhh, very intriguing! Great six!
ReplyDeleteThat last line definitely hooked me.
ReplyDeleteProvocative and sexy six. Great hook at the end.
ReplyDeleteMystery and passion. Great six.
ReplyDeleteFab six, Rebecca xx I'll be sure to pick up the first next time I'm buying ebooks -- sounds like I'd love it :) And by gosh, he should take her... the tension in this scene is sizzling HOT!
ReplyDeleteoh you word tease :D - very good
ReplyDeleteVery tense with a touch of sadness. Great six!
ReplyDeleteI think he's about to become her champion in whatever that last line meant. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet! Love the twist at the end. :)
ReplyDeleteHmm, who is the 'me' at the end? Whoever it is, it doesn't sound like a good thing. Great six!
ReplyDeleteGreat intro to the hot-blooded hero, and an irresistible left turn twist at the end. This six is both hot and cool!
ReplyDeleteGreat six with a lovely hook to end!
ReplyDeleteThis is just amazing. Such intensity! Love these six! (And allow me to offer my highest recommendation for this book! It is this good all the way through!)
ReplyDeleteGreat six! Leaves me gagging to find out more.
ReplyDeleteSo good. Let's learn some more.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE reading about a man so affected by a woman! Great!
ReplyDeleteGreat hook. I want to know more now. Thanks for visiting my blog earlier and commenting on my Six Sentence Sunday post.
ReplyDeleteDebra
You have me hooked! Now where's the rest? ;-)
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Rebecca!
LOVED the last sentence! What a great hook.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting last line!
ReplyDeleteOh, I loved that last line of dialogue “Don’t let them take her. They’ll make her me.” Leaves me with all kinds of questions I want answers to.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing! Love the little war inside his head.
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing!
ReplyDeleteOh wow. That's really interesting. Can't wait to see more from this!
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