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Sunday, April 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hey everyone,
Thanks so much for coming by. This is from my work-in-progress tentatively called Embraced. It is the second book in my Conditioned series. WARNING--Hot scene.

His finger pressed deeper into her underpants and she gasped. No one ever touched her there, not even herself. There was no privacy in Crescent. They slept on beds that were about ten inches from each other. It didn’t lend itself to a lot of self-exploration.

“I’m going to take your panties off now.”

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40 comments:

  1. An Open BookApril 24, 2011 at 3:41 AM

    Poor girl needs some privacy for self-gratification...luckily he'll show her how- great 6
    Dawne P

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  2. Jessica E. SubjectApril 24, 2011 at 4:24 AM

    So much mystery and intrigue in this excerpt regarding their world. A great excerpt! I look forward to reading more. :)

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  3. D L JacksonApril 24, 2011 at 4:47 AM

    Good girls can be bad too. Love this first time scene.

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  4. Gem SivadApril 24, 2011 at 5:18 AM

    I'm still stalled on the "I'm going to take your panties off now..." Hey, Rebecca, it's not nice to tease and then stop! Fabulous six!

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  5. Taryn KincaidApril 24, 2011 at 5:40 AM

    Want to see more of this world and these characters, especially him!

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  6. Cate MastersApril 24, 2011 at 5:44 AM

    Great teaser! No fair leaving us hanging, lol.

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  7. Sandra SookooApril 24, 2011 at 5:49 AM

    Great teasing snippet!

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  8. UnknownApril 24, 2011 at 6:42 AM

    Wow, past time for a little exploration then. Great six.

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  9. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 6:51 AM

    It appears she is going to learn a lot in the next few pages! Happy Easter Rebecca!

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  10. Cara BristolApril 24, 2011 at 7:03 AM

    Nice, makes me want to know more about the characters. Happy Easter!

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  11. Zee MonodeeApril 24, 2011 at 7:10 AM

    Hey that's a naughty cliffie! Not fair - I wanna read more... :)

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  12. Jean DavisApril 24, 2011 at 7:31 AM

    Great peak into her world in just a few lines!

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  13. Sarah GrimmApril 24, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    You can't stop there! Really, it's just cruel. ;)

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  14. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 8:17 AM

    Super sexy six! Stopping there is just so rude!

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  15. Joanne StewartApril 24, 2011 at 8:24 AM

    Ooh, very sexy. Kind of sweet too. Makes me want more! Great six.

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  16. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    a lot can be done with panties - very sexy stuff

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  17. ShellyApril 24, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    And you left it there?? (just kidding) there is a lot you can do with panties. Very hot.

    Loved it.

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  18. UnknownApril 24, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    Well hello! What a steamy 6

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  19. Luxie RyderApril 24, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    A pantie pause? What a tease you are! Great six :)

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  20. Jessica KnaussApril 24, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    This is a great place to pause, because if this is her first time, those words would give HER pause... You do a great job of evoking her world.

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  21. Vivien JacksonApril 24, 2011 at 11:10 AM

    Yes, very much do *that*! Nice rhythm here, breaking up the dialogue just enough to make that line snap. Mmmm.

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  22. LindsayApril 24, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    Great steamy six.

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  23. Hailey EdwardsApril 24, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    Oh, my. Very steamy six. Perfectly paced.

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  24. JApril 24, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    Oh yeah, explore away! Nice photo to go along with it, too. Looking forward to next week!

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  25. Stacey KennedyApril 24, 2011 at 1:30 PM

    Yes, yes...take them off so we know what happens next! :D

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  26. UnknownApril 24, 2011 at 1:58 PM

    Oh my... *fans self* Great six!

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  27. AllureVanSanzApril 24, 2011 at 2:29 PM

    And then what?? Ohh what a tease!

    Good job.

    All my best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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  28. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    Rebecca, excellent six in a few words.

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  29. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 4:10 PM

    Take 'em! Now give us the next six, LOL!

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  30. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 5:22 PM

    At least he gave the poor girl warning! Is she going to protest, I wonder? Hot six.

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  31. Jayel KayeApril 24, 2011 at 5:53 PM

    Wow. Now that was very interesting

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  32. ArleneApril 24, 2011 at 6:07 PM

    Love the sizzling set up. I want to know what life she's had so far, in a place called Crescent, and every more, I want to know where he's headed next.

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  33. UnknownApril 24, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    Excellent six!

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  34. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 9:09 PM

    Very intriguing world you're building. Looking forward to learning more.

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  35. Sandra NachlingerApril 24, 2011 at 9:10 PM

    Anticipation is half the fun! Great sexy six.

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  36. Liia Ann WhiteApril 24, 2011 at 11:07 PM

    Holy crap woman! I better get to those chapters in my inbox
    Veeeeery nice!

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  37. Roberta WalkerApril 25, 2011 at 3:39 AM

    Nice build! Leaves the reader panting for more!

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  38. J.A. BeardApril 25, 2011 at 4:04 PM

    Touch of steam. Nice. :)

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  39. AnonymousApril 25, 2011 at 5:32 PM

    Yum...what a teaser! Fantastic as always Rebecca!

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  40. Pip GreenApril 26, 2011 at 2:49 AM

    A very teasing six. :)

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