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Sunday, April 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hey everyone,
Thanks so much for coming by. This is from my work-in-progress tentatively called Embraced. It is the second book in my Conditioned series. WARNING--Hot scene.

His finger pressed deeper into her underpants and she gasped. No one ever touched her there, not even herself. There was no privacy in Crescent. They slept on beds that were about ten inches from each other. It didn’t lend itself to a lot of self-exploration.

“I’m going to take your panties off now.”

40 comments:

  1. Poor girl needs some privacy for self-gratification...luckily he'll show her how- great 6
    Dawne P

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  2. So much mystery and intrigue in this excerpt regarding their world. A great excerpt! I look forward to reading more. :)

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  3. Good girls can be bad too. Love this first time scene.

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  4. I'm still stalled on the "I'm going to take your panties off now..." Hey, Rebecca, it's not nice to tease and then stop! Fabulous six!

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  5. Want to see more of this world and these characters, especially him!

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  6. Great teaser! No fair leaving us hanging, lol.

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  7. Wow, past time for a little exploration then. Great six.

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  8. It appears she is going to learn a lot in the next few pages! Happy Easter Rebecca!

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  9. Nice, makes me want to know more about the characters. Happy Easter!

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  10. Hey that's a naughty cliffie! Not fair - I wanna read more... :)

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  11. Great peak into her world in just a few lines!

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  12. You can't stop there! Really, it's just cruel. ;)

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  13. Super sexy six! Stopping there is just so rude!

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  14. Ooh, very sexy. Kind of sweet too. Makes me want more! Great six.

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  15. a lot can be done with panties - very sexy stuff

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  16. And you left it there?? (just kidding) there is a lot you can do with panties. Very hot.

    Loved it.

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  17. A pantie pause? What a tease you are! Great six :)

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  18. This is a great place to pause, because if this is her first time, those words would give HER pause... You do a great job of evoking her world.

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  19. Yes, very much do *that*! Nice rhythm here, breaking up the dialogue just enough to make that line snap. Mmmm.

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  20. Oh, my. Very steamy six. Perfectly paced.

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  21. Oh yeah, explore away! Nice photo to go along with it, too. Looking forward to next week!

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  22. Yes, yes...take them off so we know what happens next! :D

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  23. Oh my... *fans self* Great six!

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  24. And then what?? Ohh what a tease!

    Good job.

    All my best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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  25. Take 'em! Now give us the next six, LOL!

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  26. At least he gave the poor girl warning! Is she going to protest, I wonder? Hot six.

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  27. Wow. Now that was very interesting

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  28. Love the sizzling set up. I want to know what life she's had so far, in a place called Crescent, and every more, I want to know where he's headed next.

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  29. Very intriguing world you're building. Looking forward to learning more.

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  30. Anticipation is half the fun! Great sexy six.

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  31. Holy crap woman! I better get to those chapters in my inbox
    Veeeeery nice!

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  32. Nice build! Leaves the reader panting for more!

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  33. Yum...what a teaser! Fantastic as always Rebecca!

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