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Sunday, April 17, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Thank you all so much for coming to check out this weeks Six Sentence Sunday. These six sentences come from the chapter I am writing in my Work in Progress called Embraced. It is the second book in a series called The Conditioned.


Here is this weeks six:


“I know that I want you in a way I have never wanted anyone else. Sex was kind of…blah…for me.” She shrugged and he watched transfixed as her pale shoulders went up and down in the dark. Seven had a way of saying things that was so unique to her. He doubted he’d ever hear anyone else ever describe it that way again.

“Well, we’ll endeavor to do better than blah.”

29 comments:

  1. Mmmmmm....sounds like he's going to put forth some real effort! Ha! *rubs hands together* This is gonna be gooooddd....!

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  2. Oohhh I feel some smut coming on.
    Great snippet :-)

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  3. Great setup! I can't wait to read the rest of the scene. I want to read his efforts at better than blah. :)

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  4. Can I just sit here until they get naughty? Please?

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  5. LOL @ Graylin.

    But seriously...:D

    This is great. Seven seems like a really intriguing character. I'm anxious to read more about her.

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  6. Whoever his is, I want to read more about his "endeavors." And Seven is a sooo interesting name!

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  7. Great twist! Nothing like a challenge, lol.

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  8. Better than "blah." Yeah, you go "endeavor," boy! Give it your best shot!

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  9. I know blah - he will have to work extra - hard

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  10. I have the feeling he'll go out of his way to make it better than blah. :)

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  11. Bring on the defeat of the blahs! Love it.

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  12. LOL! I LOVED your last line. How fun.

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  13. definitely need to do better than "blah"

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  14. I believe he is up to the task. I'll be back to find out. :)

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  15. Fun dialogue! Can't wait to read more. :)

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  16. “Well, we’ll endeavor to do better than blah.”

    That made me laugh. Nice line!

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  17. Made me laugh, too. Great setup.

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  18. Great six. Can't wait for what happens next.

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  19. I'm betting he does way better than 'blah'.

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  20. Mmmm, yes, let's do better than "blah". LOL

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  21. Yes! He should do something about that "blah"!

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  22. Oh damn, Rebecca--I just LOVE THIS!!

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  23. Love that last line Rebecca. :D

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  24. Blah isn't good. Thank goodness someone is willing to unblah

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