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Sunday, October 24, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday


Hello everyone,

Has a whole week gone by already? Wow. Anyway, it is Six Sentence Sunday and I am continuing to give you snippets of my work-in-progress, which is a Post-Apocalyptic Young Adult Novel. The second in a series called the Warrior. The first one, Initiation, will be coming out soon with Decadent Publishing.

Here are my six sentences for this week and please find all the other entries listed here


Finally, when I could speak, I made my mouth work. “It wasn’t enough to treat me like prey? To send vampires and werewolves after me every night just for fun?”

He shook his head, baring his teeth in what could only be called a wolfish manner. It made me want to gag. “No, you proved to be more trouble than you were worth. We have a system for dealing with people like you...


12 comments:

  1. Hmmm...Rebecca I gotta say its an intriguing post and I'd like to read more, like now. Please. :P

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  2. They have a system, huh? That's probably pleasant. Great excerpt!

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  3. Well darn. Since this is YA, I guess his idea of "punishment" isn't the same as mine. ;)

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  4. Yikes. That's not something you ever want to hear.

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  5. Can't wait for the release of this! Because I happen to know it's awesome ;)

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  6. Rebecca, your prose is so tight and engaging it makes me want to read this YA and that says a lot, 'cause I'm not a huge YA reader. This snippet just grabbed me in and had me engrossed.

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  7. Uh oh. It doesn't sound like a very pleasant one.

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  8. I want to know what the system is, but mostly, I want to know what she says next in response. will she be scared, or will she tell him off?

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  9. I really want to know what the system is! Such an intriguing story.

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