Well in anticipation of the fact that I got a release date for Driven, the second book in my Young Adult series The Warrior, I thought I would show six sentences this week from that book.
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RR
“It’s Glen.” Her face took on a dreamy quality when she said his name.
I nearly threw up in my mouth. “Glen?”
The same Glen who had made my life miserable with his snide remarks and difficult behavior every day I’d been in school with him? She had to be kidding.
Dun Dun DUUUN!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait for this! Great six
LOL.
ReplyDeleteAh, teenage love--the romance, the innocence, the puking in your mouth.
You nailed it.
Thanks for sharing, Rebecca.
And there's the conflict... Great six! Reading Initiation now in preparation for the release of Driven. :)
ReplyDeleteOh yeah, we've all had that reaction. Perfectly described.
ReplyDeleteWe all have that person we'd prefer not to see. Great six!
ReplyDeleteOh noes! A good setup for a pernicious conflict.
ReplyDeleteYes, you really made me relive that experience. Great six! And congrats on the coming release.
ReplyDeleteNice YA voice!
ReplyDeleteTook me back... :) Yes, great voice. And congrats!
ReplyDeleteYes, I knew a few of those in highschool! loved the six and can't wait to read the book.
ReplyDeletelol ah, gotta love the teen scene. Nice job! and great background for the blog!
ReplyDeleteLove this! I don't normally read YA, but I'm going to have to start. You've got a wonderful voice.
ReplyDeleteI always love the "throw up in my mouth" line--humorous conflict!
ReplyDeleteIsn't it funny how the same person can inspire such radically different feelings? Congrats of the upcoming release!
ReplyDeleteGreat voice! I'm going to recommend this to my girls (15 & 16). They should love it (and I can read it afterwards). Great six.
ReplyDeleteWe all remember those days...those boys. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteyeay on getting release date! And almost puking in the mouth...eww. Perfection, as usual! I love how your writing always seem so natural... you seem to really get inside your characters head. Great work.
ReplyDeleteSuch believable characterization! Awesome six.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet!
ReplyDeletethrow up in my mouth - eowww - teenagers - nice conflict presentation
ReplyDeleteNice post. Congrats on the release
ReplyDeleteHmmm... Glen smells like trouble... Good trouble, :)
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the release date. Great six and YA descriptive with the throw up in my mouth line. Ah, young love. Isn't it wonderful
ReplyDeleteLove it! Trouble is brewing....
ReplyDeleteSometimes these juveniles grow up . . . sometimes not. Great six!
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Now there's a conflict! Love the throw up in my mouth line.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on getting a release date.
ReplyDeleteLove the girl's disdain.
I love these kinds of stories with the bad boy from her youth. YUM.
ReplyDeleteOh, boy. I remember my friends falling for guys I couldn't stand. lol This is the first time I've seen your new cover. It looks great! Matches book one very well.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful choice of six! Well done, well done!
ReplyDeleteOh man...yeah. I think we've all been there. Great six. I felt her gut reaction!
ReplyDeleteGreat six. I hate the feeling of throwing up in my mouth...what a connection!
ReplyDeleteUh-oh! This six really draws us in. Great six, Rebecca.
ReplyDeleteFun six. Throw up on Glen.
ReplyDeleteGak! Man, not THAT Glen. LOL! Great job.
ReplyDeleteLOL! I love it.
ReplyDelete~ Renee
Great six. Very descriptive. I'm definitely reminded of being back in school.
ReplyDeleteI like your YA voice.
ReplyDeleteYuck, but the perfect YA description!
ReplyDeleteEww Glen does not sound pleasant at all ... I want more!
ReplyDeleteYou've really got that teenage voice, especially dreaminess oozing with every mention of a boy's name.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the upcoming release of Driven.
*claps* Congrats on the release day!! Looks so good!
ReplyDeleteI just flashed back... ::sighs:: Screw you, Mike! Yeah I still feel it!
ReplyDelete...okay I'm back...and over it. Mmhm.
::grins:: I'm a huge YA fan, so much fun to go back and reconnect with some of the best and worst times isn't it?
Great job.
Allure
Great YA voice! Congrats on your new contract! I think I'm hooked.
ReplyDeleteI love her attitude!
ReplyDeleteAll girls must live this moment.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant SSS! Oh, and thank you for the copy of Eye Contact, cant wait to read it!
ReplyDeleteha ha! That takes me back...
ReplyDeletegreat six!
lol, I was right there! I even gagged at the puking reference.
ReplyDeleteLMAO! I love her reaction!
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